Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Kyle Thomas our add
As of now in our project, we are moving smoothly. We are making a commercial about credit card use in college students. We have our script ready to go and be filmed. We plan on meeting up next week on Tuesday to get all our scenes filmed. Our group is working very well. We are getting all of our tasks done well, and on time. The only problem we have ran into is finding our camera. We have already talked to Chads roommate and have a camera ready for us next week. Everything seems to be looking good so far.
Thursday, October 15, 2009
media and design
The beginning of the first section in the Norton Field Guide section, was mostly information I had already heard through high school.
It then went into media and design. One that I picked up on was the print text. Print text is used in every type of writing. You can make so many variations to print text such as the typefaces, layouts, paragraphs, lists, headings, etc... Making your writing appealing is very important. If you don't get the readers attention, they wont be interested in what you have to say.
The spoken text talks mostly about clarity. If you don't organize your thoughts, and give your words structure, you will lose the attention of your audience. I can really relate to the spoken text section because it gave me some use full advice for my project coming up. I have to act in a commercial, and it really made me think about the clarity of the message we will be portraying.
It then went into media and design. One that I picked up on was the print text. Print text is used in every type of writing. You can make so many variations to print text such as the typefaces, layouts, paragraphs, lists, headings, etc... Making your writing appealing is very important. If you don't get the readers attention, they wont be interested in what you have to say.
The spoken text talks mostly about clarity. If you don't organize your thoughts, and give your words structure, you will lose the attention of your audience. I can really relate to the spoken text section because it gave me some use full advice for my project coming up. I have to act in a commercial, and it really made me think about the clarity of the message we will be portraying.
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Guidence is the key
What is the first thing your audience will see? Yes, it is your title. I never put much thought into my title but now realize its a vital part to my paper. I feel pretty dumb for lacking creative titles, because when I look for something to read I always judge by the title. The "key" to writing is your beginning and ending. Every introduction you write needs to focus on grabbing the attention of your reader. While your writing, think about who will be reading your paper, and try to make a connection with their interests. Once you have got their attention with your thesus you need to make good, flowing transitions from topic to topic. Its very easy to lose a reader with pointless detail, or by jumping around to much. Your paper must flow. You may understand it, but can your audience?
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Understand, dont reread
The chapter 36 reading was telling us how to grasp the main points of what were reading, and to ask questions about what we don't understand. When reading, pace yourself to make sure you aren't just reading, your understanding the text. Ive had an ever-lasting problem with reading, and then forgetting about what I have just read. Asking questions while you read, highlighting main points, making side notes, and SLOWING DOWN will keep me from rereading another chapter. Reading slower may feel like it will never end, but I will never have to go back and read a chapter again.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
Editing and Proofreading
We don't edit for perfection, we edit for clarity. The reading tells you to ask yourself a lot of questions about your writing. "Does each paragraph focus on a point?" "Does every sentence relate to your main idea?" Where have you placed your most important information - at the beginning, middle, or end?" When editing you have to look at your writing as a whole, and then pick out what disrupts the main idea of your paper. If you have a paragraph that doesn't relate to your topic it needs to be thrown out or revised. Irrelevant material throws the audience off of what your trying to say. Your writing needs to have good transitions of thought, making your paper flow so the reader stays with your main idea.
The reading breaks editing down into three categories; editing paragraphs, editing sentences, and editing words. When editing, you will have to go over a paper more than once. This gives you an easy way to break it down. First edit the paragraphs, then the sentences, and then check for common spelling errors. Using the three steps when editing will help you break the paper down so you don't miss anything.
"Proofreading your final draft with care will ensure that your message is taken seriously." Proofreading is the final stage of the editing process. When proofreading your looking for little mistakes. Things like mixed-up fonts or missing pages will hurt your credibility as a writer. Don't trust spell check, it doesn't read your paper.
The reading breaks editing down into three categories; editing paragraphs, editing sentences, and editing words. When editing, you will have to go over a paper more than once. This gives you an easy way to break it down. First edit the paragraphs, then the sentences, and then check for common spelling errors. Using the three steps when editing will help you break the paper down so you don't miss anything.
"Proofreading your final draft with care will ensure that your message is taken seriously." Proofreading is the final stage of the editing process. When proofreading your looking for little mistakes. Things like mixed-up fonts or missing pages will hurt your credibility as a writer. Don't trust spell check, it doesn't read your paper.
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Assessing Writing
The reading was over assessing your own writing you do for yourself, and how I should NOT do it. The book says to "shut off your internal evaluator", and just write. Don't worry about the structure of your writing, just let your thoughts flow. When you stop to fix the structure, or to revise, you lose your best thoughts!
The next section talked about writing for others. It says how we need to make our writing as clear as we possibly can, because we won't be there to tell them why we wrote what we wrote. Stay focused on the subject, and make sure we have support for what we say, and lastly make sure its organized.
Practice makes perfect. No one will be an expert revisor their first time around. Make sure that every paragraph supports your thesis statement. We revise to sharpen our focus, strengthen our argument, and to organize our paper for ultimate clarity.
The next section talked about writing for others. It says how we need to make our writing as clear as we possibly can, because we won't be there to tell them why we wrote what we wrote. Stay focused on the subject, and make sure we have support for what we say, and lastly make sure its organized.
Practice makes perfect. No one will be an expert revisor their first time around. Make sure that every paragraph supports your thesis statement. We revise to sharpen our focus, strengthen our argument, and to organize our paper for ultimate clarity.
Thursday, September 10, 2009
Drafting
I wish I would have read this section at the beginning of high school. It would have solved all my problems. After reading I understand many different ways to help me get started, instead of sitting down and staring at a blank Microsoft Word document for twenty minutes. Setting a schedule is something I am never good at. Procrastinating until the last minute stresses me out, usually causing my writers block.
These sections help with understanding that writing is in fact, a process. Its almost impossible to write your best on the first try. When writing you will run into problems, and the reading tells you how to deal with these issues.
The second section shows the importance of detail in writing. You have to make the reader feel the senses you are describing. Help him taste the delicious pizza your telling of. The use of adjectives is important to detailed writing.
Narrating. This section is what I should have read before sitting for an hour or two writing my narrative essay. The use of time markers help the reader understand the time line of your story, showing them the sequence of events. The use of transitions help the reader follow the change of time or events in the story. The use of words like first, then, meanwhile, at last, etc.. Its important to make your transitions flow so you don't lose your readers.
Using dialogue brings voices into writing other than my own. Its the difference between telling a story of a scene, or re-enacting the scene so the reader follows the play by play. Would you rather read about an interview, or read the interview as if you were sitting in the room?
These sections help with understanding that writing is in fact, a process. Its almost impossible to write your best on the first try. When writing you will run into problems, and the reading tells you how to deal with these issues.
The second section shows the importance of detail in writing. You have to make the reader feel the senses you are describing. Help him taste the delicious pizza your telling of. The use of adjectives is important to detailed writing.
Narrating. This section is what I should have read before sitting for an hour or two writing my narrative essay. The use of time markers help the reader understand the time line of your story, showing them the sequence of events. The use of transitions help the reader follow the change of time or events in the story. The use of words like first, then, meanwhile, at last, etc.. Its important to make your transitions flow so you don't lose your readers.
Using dialogue brings voices into writing other than my own. Its the difference between telling a story of a scene, or re-enacting the scene so the reader follows the play by play. Would you rather read about an interview, or read the interview as if you were sitting in the room?
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